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A Moment With You

Let me feel the tenderness of your lips upon mine,
as we hold our bodies so tight.
Such affections between us is so divine,
while with that first gentle kiss the flames of passion it does ignite.

Hands moving over each others body awakening the passion in our heart,
as we find ourselves lost within the moment of such pleasure.
Our souls combine upon this night never to be torn apart,
while the affections we feel forever shall we treasure.

Let my lips taste your flesh so soft and warm,
as the mere presence of you intoxicates me so much.
All that our hearts desire our bodies now perform,
as we become overwhelmed by each others gentle touch.

Excitement building within our soul,
as we find ourselves no longer able to hold back any more.
No longer can we find self-control,
wanting to see how far our passion can explore.

Our bodies join as one; thrusting to a savage beat,
holding each other tight, as we ride the crest of our desire.
Now  joined together is our soul complete,
as we are enveloped within loves over powering fire.

Together we show all that is in our heart,
bringing about a love so strong that will never part.

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  • Sandygram
    January 29

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    Hello Michael

    You do have a wonderful way with words. A beautiful and passionate write. A delight to read this morning. You take care. Sandy


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 29
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    hot

    love this piece