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Obsure

Forget me light
For I am never yours
For I have never been held

Forget me sun
For I have never felt your rays
For you have never illuminated

Forget me white
For you have forgotten
For I am the depth

Forget me rainbow
For I am the colors of darkness
For I am the thoughts of dreams

Forget me bright
For I have answered you
For I have forgotten

Forget me...

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 28

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    Oooh great job!!! i love what you've done with the prompt. the concept of light forgetting a dark thing. bravo! thank you for entering and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina