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When Sampson wouldn’t cut his hair,
Delilah did it on a dare –
                        Barbarous!


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  • "Barbarous" - I love it! Some guys will do anything to please a woman.

    Liked your write. Congrats on the HM.


  • Lyndon gold member
    February 13

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    Glorious, almost!

    He had nits and she had t...!
    No? I'll have to read the Bible again. Good hook, line and sinker.
    Also, fine alliteration in the 'line'.
    Ron, a Winkler.


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    February 1
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    YAY!!! Two in a row!!!


  • Nickelspring gold member
    January 29
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    I really like this one! So very clever you are!!
    KW~


  • Vigorous
    January 29

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    A very BARBERous act indeed! All kudos to you for a penning a beautiful piece of literature and hitory...


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 29
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    Oh yeah! Funny and apposite - almost like a Tom Swifty!

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