When Sampson wouldn’t cut his hair,
Delilah did it on a dare –
Barbarous!
A contest entry
- #160 Winklings for Allpoetry. by Lyndon.
1750 points, ended February 14, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Barbarous" - I love it! Some guys will do anything to please a woman.
Liked your write. Congrats on the HM.
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Glorious, almost!
He had nits and she had t...!
No? I'll have to read the Bible again. Good hook, line and sinker.
Also, fine alliteration in the 'line'.
Ron, a Winkler.


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YAY!!! Two in a row!!!


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I really like this one! So very clever you are!!
KW~

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A very BARBERous act indeed! All kudos to you for a penning a beautiful piece of literature and hitory...


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Oh yeah! Funny and apposite - almost like a Tom Swifty!


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