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Presumption

She pursed her lips in pretty pout,
her beau did catch them thereabout -
                    Mis[s]understood!


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  • Lyndon gold member
    February 13

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    Yep. I get it!

    I kiss 'em on the neck if I miss the lips. Well ... I used to a long time ago.
    Thank you for your entry. Best wishes.
    Ron. A Winkler.