Why are the things most needed
the ones most avoided?
Why are the moments that are never forgotten
the ones that end up never spoken?
Why are the laughs laughed hardest
forgotten at our darkest moments?
Why are the closest people
the ones kept from the closest you?
Why is it that everyone follows these rules
that only cause us everyone pain?
Is it because it will hurt, or
Is it because we were told these lies
Of how it's not fair to share out pain?
Why did we ever listen?
When did we even start this?
But even more confusing,
Why are we STILL listening?
Author notes
Its missing something... Ill add it when I find it...
found it...
its there..
Comments
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these are actually some pretty profound questions.. i never really realized that until they were pointed out and so this poem really awed me. very nice, i love it.
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Very good! I liked it!
Some typos, though, (you didn't think I could comment without pointing that out, did you? But that's why you love me.
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Stanza 4 - FROM you
Stanza 6 - OUR, not out
Haha.
Anyway, good poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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