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Depravity

Before you I place this picture,

to be etched forever on the wall

of your depraved mind.

Look closely at the embers of

the child you hollowed out and

left only the trademark of your sickness

to find.

 

This is the portrait that I bid you

to try to sketch away, the sands of

the hourglass that holdfast to digrace.

Erase from those insipid dreams

you have burden her with, the thorn

in her hopes that clings firmly in place.

 

Will it even click in the peripheral

visions of your madness how you

 encapsulated her very soul.

With one licentious breath you

you slayed the guardian of any

compassion, losing all control.

 

I employ the angels to contain me,

for I yearn to stifle the yawn of

satisfaction you still inhale.

From your moth-stained life

I beseech the gods of justice

into your life to torturously sail.

 

While you are there perched upon

the canvas of a morally corrupted

percipice, holding tight to your infliction,

I stand bowed in a prayer of restoration,

for the grace that you snatched and flung

aimlessly into the river of confliction.

 

Must I plead for a soul exasperated with

such a venomous and vile ambition

that you wear as a coat of armour.

Should I  be inundated with the honor

you lacked and pull from my ens the

overused excuse of "he's not normal."

 

But how can I when I have to wonder

how will this innocent entity now

opiate the demons that now invade her.

Forgive you, must I, this disgusting exihibition

 that your sickness used to degrade her.

 

No longer privy to the ambience of bubble baths

cotton candy, you relegated her to smell the breathe

of perversion that seeps into each childish hope.

Who will rescue her from those smoldering

embers that infuses her with thoughts of

depravity that no one, let alone a child should have to cope.

 

 

                             marjoriejoyceleslie

                             01/28/09

 

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i may have used all the words.

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  • Denerica
    March 21, 2009
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    Deep passion and worthy of the silver. lBlessings.


  • Ronald Wiseman gold member
    February 3, 2009
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    queenie

    congrats. on Silver. This poem reads with passion and experiential truth.


    • LdyBrknWing gold member
      February 3, 2009
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      HUH????


      "...This poem read sweetly and wisely?" Not sure what poem he was reading, but it couldn't have been this one! (Sorry; I would normally not do this, but honestly, it would just be better if people didn't comment, than comment with such stupidity.)


  • Todays Poem Box
    February 1, 2009

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    Excellent job with the word bank!
    15/15 words used.
    Great imagery. Excellent emotion. Incredible rhyme.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck!
    Write on.
    ~*~


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    January 30, 2009

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    Very well done. I see many poems from people who were abused but never from the point of view of an observer. Great job.

    Mike


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 30, 2009

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    Wow! And this is a wordbank I wopuld never have known. You have craftred a brilliant yet sorrowful poem here. The emotions just pour from this page and sounds so much like a picture of someone's reality.
    Once innocence is taken, whatever the excuse, it can never be given back and that's what makes acceptance of another actions and forgiveness almost impossible.
    An amazing write indeed.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Gaylene


  • Desire gold member
    January 30, 2009

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    Wow!!

    Your words grabbed so hard that I had to stop- go back and read again~ Powerful energy You have evoked which tugs- but also pulls deep to the core Message leaves a stain to be remembered but as it should~ Bravo!! This swells the eyes~
    abuse in all elements sickens me~ Innocent victims should not have to endure the aftermath on any level~ should not have had to become a victim at all
    I also Appreciate Your visit to my work
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    January 29, 2009

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    Wow!!!

    Prompted by "Words," hum? Not hardly, though I know that a contest with that theme has been honored to have been graced by your incredible talent. But this one, my precious friend, is so very difficult to comment on...perhaps I'll have to give that to you in a personal discussion, soon. Suffice it to say that, as always, you take your reader on a roller coaster ride of emotion, and I fear that I'll be dizzy for quite some time after the image of the words have faded. Awesome work, dear friend. I only wish you didn't understand the depth of this subject in such a personal way.

    Paula

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