My life,
Just another charade,
I look behind this mask,
Who am I,
What am I,
My life is a lie,
It has been,
I don't know who I am anymore,
Who,
Mixed emotions,
What you see and hear,
What I truly feel,
Are the same,
Yet so different,
What do I truly feel,
Smiles,
Laughter,
All that masks,
The pain deep within,
A struggle,
To break out,
To stay within,
Which will win,
Death,
Life,
Love,
Hate,
All reside here,
I'm the saint,
Filled with darkness,
Who am I?????
watcha think, brutal truth please
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again a gud one...I hope u do a little mre justice nd try to gt out mre beautiful feelin's frm inside ur heart...i hope u undrstnd wt am tryn to say
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oops
forgot the applaud. lol
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I loved it
I love poems that make the reader think, and thats what this one did. Great job! -
Brutal? hmm... well for starters its great how you question the reader, it really makes you think deeply about the composer, and the title? great choice in words my dear! thumbs up!
but i really didn't feel the emotion like i have before, its not one of your best, not your best work but still thumbs up man!
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Wow, this is very mysterious. It's very hard to tell who you are because they're so many thing about you that you don't understand about yourself. and you must try to find yourself too. It must be really hard trying to find yourself I should know because I am still trying to find myself too. anyway this is a really great write and a very enjoyable read. My favorite lines were
" Mixed emotions,
What you see and hear,
What I truly feel,
Are the same,
Yet so different,
What do I truly feel,"
That's great right there. very creative and true.
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