There's too many graveyards.
People are dropping like flies.
Every 4 seconds someone in the world dies.
Who will save the world?
Will will save the poor?
Wait a minute!
It's stated at Revelations 21:4.
Yes, God will even raise the dead.
Enough is enough!
What's the deal about pretending you're tough?
We all get sad, and cry.
After all, who really wants to die?
Who will save the world?
Who will save the poor?
Wait a minute!
It's stated at Revelations 21:4.
Yes, God will even raise the dead.
This had to be said.
Author notes
Allpoetry name: Evemauy
Topic: Death
picture was taken from: www.watchtower.org
A contest entry
- Important Issues by pinksnowboots.
570 points, ended February 19, 67 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Congratulations on the honorable mention. I like this one. It is very honest and comes from God's word, the Bible. This one has great rhymes. I love the way it talks about important things in the world.
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I really like this! May I suggest "This is all that needs be said." for the last line? Just a suggestion-I really like it as is.
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Great write, keep it up ^_^
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