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Living in a Fantasy

Too many shadows and too many lies
No whispered confession could make it right
I'm caught all up in this secret sin
But it's not so secret if everyone's in
But everyone draws their own conclusion
They got caught up in the psychotic illusion
I tried to hold on, just hoping I could
But they told me to stop, I'm wishing I would
But, eleven months later, I'm too far gone
Too little left of me to let me go on

-Andi

Author notes

I did this for my english class....my teacher loved it. Normally I'd try to scare the teachers, but I'm going easy on this one for awhile. Not anymore, after this week, when I can breathe again after getting all the work from her done....she's going to get some major poems from hell.

-Andi

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