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Please Don't!

Im scared..just so scared...
and i feel so helpless
is there anything i can do
to make you feel better?

If anything ever happened
i'd never forgive myself
i'd have to die too
cause one thing i cant do
is live without you here with me.

Please listen to what im saying
im so sorry i failed as a friend
but tell me what i can do now
believe me, i'll do anything that i can.

Hunny im so so sorry
that you feel so bad
im asking you now
can you forgive me?

Whenever you're feeling down
i'll always be there i promise you
now please please tell me
is there anything i can do?

I dont even know what to do
I dont know what to say
what will i do when you've gone?

You mean everything to me
to me you mean the world
everyday i'll cry myself to sleep
at the thought you're
no longer with me.

You may say ill be looking over you
you may say you'll be in my heart
but all i want is you by my side
like you always have been.

I dont want to have to feel you there
i dont want to have to pretend
i just want you here alive
remember what things for life
we'd had planned?

Please now im begging you
think about what i've said
i'd never forgive myself ever
if you ended up dead :'(

hunny im so so sorry please forgive me ill do anything :'( i dont know what to doo :'( :'( :'(

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Comments

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  • XXheartbroken3XX
    January 29, 2009
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    awwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooo sad... hope everything works out....

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 29, 2009
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    Awww this is precious, a mix of deep care and concern, Very well crafted.


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    January 28, 2009
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    Beautiful i can feel the desperation + worry in your words, i can relate x


  • peregrin
    January 28, 2009
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    Touching...


  • CherokeeSiren
    January 28, 2009
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    Very heartfelt. nice job

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