Haunting nightmares
slip in my mind, in
and out of consciousness;
Let me escape.
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I watch as you become
distant, not the same
as before, we don't talk;
not really.
-♦-♦-
If I asked you to be
my Valentine would you
smile, just for me? And
be as happy as last year
when I asked the same thing.
-♦-♦-
Summer's here now as the
heat muddles my thoughts;
but it's not cold at least,
you know I don't like it,
but somehow you do.
-♦-♦-
Just promise me you're
okay, that I'm fretting
for nothing, and I'm not
just hung up as a skeleton now.
Author notes
I'm not sure who I'd like to be >.<
Perhaps a niece or ...
something.
I have a very large family 
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I guess I wrote this with someone in mind...
haven't really talked to them for a while
and I rather miss them.
Just want them to know
if they ever get to read
that I do loves them,
and I'm here for them xx
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Comments
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Hoodwinked
So sad the way we let those we care about at one point become, distant, "skeleton's". I hope you find you are stll living in the hearts of those you are thinkiing of here.
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oh, I do like this alot. I'm sure the judge will too.
Juls
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:D
Tranget but soo beutiful1 Good luck!
tibby
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but i did like it (:
in fact i loved the simplicity of this write. no effort to write poetry, make it pretty and yet it is.
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you have a heart of gold, keep it happy.. thanks for entering my contest....
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"and I'm not just hung up as a skeleton now.."
^^
"Haunting nightmares
slip in my mind, in
and out of consciousness;
Let me escape."
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I'm not just a skeleton am I ??
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You are not just a skeleton
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If I asked you to be
my Valentine would you
smile, just for me? And
be as happy as last year
when I asked the same thing
its upsetting how things change in that way
you conveyed your emotions well
great poem
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its sadly beautiful.
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Thank you
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