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Not Today

The pain inside won't go away,
I remember every day,
all the lies you told to me,
and why in love we couldn't be.

Yet, you say you're sorry, and I give in,
you know I can't do this again.
I can't trust you through the tears,
because you lied, I live in fear.

You cheated then, without regret,
and expect me to just forget,
the nights I cried myself to sleep,
because your love I couldn't keep.

I can't believe things aren't the same,
this love, to you, is just a game,
make up your mind OR let me be,
I don't see why you still need me.

I know now what my love is worth,
you returned it with a ton of hurt,
I'm the one you love, you say,
I can't believe that, not today.

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  • Still Standing gold member
    February 23

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    Very hurtful

    This is very hurtful I can relate to this so much! It always seem after dirt is done they want to come back then your like okay...one more chance...ok one more chance..ok one more chance, you get my drift!? there are a few standouts in this poem but the biggest is:

    I know now what my love is worth,
    you returned it with a ton of hurt,
    I'm the one you love, you say,
    I can't believe that, not today.


    and I shouldn't have believed it yesterday...good job, thanks for entering and good luck!


  • trekkergirl
    February 16

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    yeah this is one fella you just gotta get out of your heart... cuz he isn't going to do anything but hurt you. And you don't deserve any of that... find someone who will treat you like the special person that you are. thanks for sharing this with us.


  • echo-ink
    February 15
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    Loved it.
    Please put the prompt in the AN, thanks.


  • twiztidXxXbeauty
    February 13

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    wow...omg..in this your emotions are so strong,clear and it's just FREAKIN AMAZING!! i know how these feelings go and this is just a breath taking poem