If my life were a T.V
I know I believe
To see you in peace
where just you and me
Forever us be
If my life were a T.V
We live by the sea
To plea disagree
With love and achieve
But never will she
My mind roaming free
To know we can’t be
Together us thee
I just can’t agreed
Author notes
Well this is one quickly I did in school for skip time thinking what my life would be a T.V, this was suppose to be a song(for my band) but well I just change up for a poem today, and also the love I will never get, why can't we just live like the way it would be huh.
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Interesting - although I got a bit confused, imagining life as a tv, I think perhaps my mind is too addled at the moment to understand it
But hey, all writing is good writing for development and what not so thanks for entering
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This is a very different style than I'm used to seeing but I liked the concept behind it. The transitions were done nicely. Good job!
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I loved this part:
"I know I believe
To see you in peace
where just you and me
Forever us be"
I really liked this poem except for each line rhymed. Ii was still very goo, I just don't really like that style/type of poetry. Thanks for entering! -
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I agree, but this is a quicky, I just wrote what in my mind, and when i started, I jsut can't stop rhyming, getting pretty annoy overtime.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
hello killertu,
I am wondering if it should be "If my life were on T.V." instead of "if my live were a T.V."?
I hope that you got the points in school for this. It's a very nice expression of feeling.
Criss
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Well I'm not a big fan to let people SEE me what am doing so it were a T.V and this is just a poem to passing time on school, so.
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