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Life in a Bubble

Hope's pink passion
swirls through the
blue

Conjuring a new
world where
dreams do
come true...

Electrifying
intentions
of everything
that's good...

Step into a
realm,
where all
is understood.

Cast aside
your fears,
step into
the light

Once inside
my bubble,
you'll no
longer need
to fight.

Author notes

Option #2 http://mariekeflow.deviantart.com/art/world-in-hope-110989911

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  • aboomer silver member
    January 29, 2009
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    Great wording for that cool pic! Love the flow of this, too!
    best wishes in your contest


  • Desire gold member
    January 28, 2009

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    Wow~

    Oh My~ Love the images You have brought forward and done so in Brevity~ Heck I tend to write a novel Me working on that one
    Excellent this is and Love the words: step into a realm where all is understood I get that futuristic feel with this one
    for some reason I had a Space Odyssey moment
    also tight rhyme too
    Woot~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • islekine
    January 28, 2009
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    Thanks so much for your

    wonderful comments! I enjoyed the picture and writing this!
    Be well and blessed!

    and


  • liduen silver member
    January 28, 2009

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    This is a beautiful take on the prompt! The last stanza has a certain magical quality that I can't place. I love the title too.

    Good luck in my contest!