Chiseled blocks of stone,
Placed precisely upon one another,
a perfectly placed peak,
to tickle the heavens of the Gods,
man seeking immortality of Man,
their name to be remembered throughout the ages,
Seeking the immortality of the Ka and Ba,
Through a pile of stone.
Author notes
I chose the word pyramid.
In a list
- Goddess/Wiccan • next in list
- Society (my thoughts on where we are and where we are headed) • next in list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (P) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended February 22, 42 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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congradulations on the green thingy
stunning
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Merry meet,
Thank you for the congrats and for your applause.
Amythest
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I think you took this prompt and owned it. It is well written, interesting and holds a great deal of fact and conviction. Impressive to say the least
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Merry meet,
Thank you for the Honorable Mention and for your applause. This was a wonderful challenge.
Amythest
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Very percise prose within such little spoken words. I liked it. Reminds me of the sc-fi novel series Im reading. Its very good with its chosen details and words to describe it. Great write, Mistress Amythest Moonjade.
Sincerely,
XxDragonWolfxX
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Merry meet,
Thank you for your applause. As I was writing this, it seemed to me that less was more.
Amythest
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