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Mystical Enchantment




 

Mystical presence of fantasia

waves whispers of life

into quills

as a dance of syllables

evokes kaleidoscope

sighs~

 

pools of dreams

painted in rich fantasies

invite thoughts to deepen;

delving into souls depths of wonderment

with enchantment taking wings

 

capturing feathers on flight,

upon the winds of inspiration,

she shares sweet scents of storms to come

 

without these raindrops that sparkle

into twilight... 

silent tears would just cascade

onto forsaken parchment~

 

 

 

 


 

Author notes

It is always a pleasure to honor such a talented, giving poetess!!!
Thank you for offering my muse to take part in this contest!!
My best to you Mysticstorm and thank you for all of the inspiration to pen!!!

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  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    February 10
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    This is beautiful and I wish I could consider it for one of the three top trophies, but sadly you did not enter a prewrite per the rules to validate this entry, therefore I cannot, however I will leave it in the contest and consider it for HM because it does reflect perfectly what I was looking for. Thank you for entering.


    • jasminerose
      February 11
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      You did verify and remove my other pre write piece entered.. At that time I added my new piece as I do follow the rules to a T as I am also a stickler about them. You can check your comments "Come dance with me"
      No matter at all, for this isn't about trophies or points this is about honoring a lovely poetess and all she has offered to us with her poems, contests and friendship!
      Thankyou for the honorable mention as I am very delighted you enjoyed my poem.
      Hugs to you for giving so much love to sweet mysticstorm!!
      Jasminerose


  • Harrisham Minhas
    February 7

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    This has been sweetly expressed.
    Good luck to you in the contest, my friend.




  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 2

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    This is so sweet and lovely...beautiful metaphor and flow...your wors are an honor to me and I am touched by every word you wrote...thank you for being a friend...

    Love,
    mystic

    • jasminerose
      February 3
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      You are sooooo very welcome and it is completely my honor to be your friend as you bring to so many.. such happiness and true friendship!!
      So delighted you enjoyed my poem!!
      Thankyou


  • Fug-azi
    February 2

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    good to see you visiting us sis .. lol

    Have missed you


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 2

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    I am sure the lady in question will smile serenely when she reads this beautiful perfumed write=


  • Sonja
    January 30

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    The flow of your words are so easy and free that captured my mind to think about them. It is not easy to write a poetry as a tribute and to be honest like you are.
    ~Sonja~


  • Room without doors gold member
    January 29

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    Outstanding

    This is a lovely tribute to a fellow poet. Your writing always impresses me with your eye for detail and strong images. I thought the ending was very poetic. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Dragon Tamer
    January 29

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    This is an awesomely powerfully moving piece on Mother Nature's wonders.I felt as though I was right in the middle of an enchanted forest as it started to rain gently on everything, cleansing away all the dirt and grime of the world Thank you for sharing this mystically teleporting piece with us and best of luck in the contest!
    Don


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 28

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    Beautiful poem here to honor such a wonderful poetess and contest host..
    Your talent shines as always, bff!
    Best wishes in the contest!

    Lynda

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