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Dusk Sad



Be it near or far
to where you are-

there's a part of me
that follows.

always trying to read,
but coming up short.

holding onto the lifeline
trying to pull myself closer-

dipping behind the golden sunset-
the lingering of my heart follows me
into the darkness.







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  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 29, 2009
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    Another beautiful write here, love the imagery conveyed in this one.


  • penman gold member
    January 28, 2009
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    Excellent

    Oh my short, but so powerful. Such a great read. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    January 28, 2009

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    Wow~

    Beautiful Brevity and Love how You worded this Precious Spirit! Adore the words: dipping behind the sunset~ Yay!! Sounds so therapeutic
    but then the eyes swell at the last stanza
    Oy!!! Powerful verse Precious!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes always
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~