Tomorrow your gonna wake up dead
Cause today your last reason for anything
Has left you to die
And maybe thats the reason why
You can't breath
You can't think
Can't even summon the energy to scream
The world is black
So take it back
All the words you said
That made him leave you for dead
Just lay down you pritty girl
And let the tears wash all the pain away
Cause there will be no tomorrow
Today will be the final day
Your loud music can't help you now
You are just to far gone
And so just stay quiet
Don't say a word
Cause your world is crashing down
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HOLY SHIT.WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT GAVE ME GOOSE BUMPS. AND LIKE WOW. I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO DECRIBE HOW THIS POEM IS. AFTER READING EACH LINE IT'S LIKE A HIT A PUNCH, BECAUSE OF HOW MUCH POWER IS BEHIND EACH WORD, EACH LINE. I DON'T KNOE IF WHAT I SAID EVEN MAKES SENCES. IT JUST SO POWERFUL THAT IT'S REALLY HARD TO EXPLAIN WHAT I MEAN. YEAH WOW. I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING BAD ABOUT HTIS POEM, BECAUSE THERE ISN'T ANY THING WRONG WITH IT. THE WORDING IS GREAT. I LOVED THIS POEM. REALLY GREAT WRITE. HOPE TO READ SOME MORE OF YOUR POEMS.
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holy crapcakes. lol this is reallllly weird. cuz its VERY much how im feeling at this moment. and basically same situation
really good
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