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Thirty minutes






Cold morning;
floor to door,
thirty minutes.

Is there time
to pause,
to find
inspiration.

Reds, greens
of ready lights
VCR, cable, phone
bring back
a smile of Christmas.

Close enough.





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  • Mari Goes gold member
    January 28

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    You know I always thought that you could get inspired by anything (miss your bus poems by the way), and you show that every time you post a poem.
    Lack of inspiration can be inspiring too.
    Nice to see you posting again