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*~Goodbye my love~*

What you didn't know
Is that I'm in love with you
But when you uttered those dreadful words
My heart just ripped in two
And now, every time I see you
You just turn your head and sigh
It's like now you don't care at all
And it makes me want to die
I hate myself for loving you
I don't know why I even try
I guess I'm meant to be alone
Excuse me while I cry
And while I write a note to you
My last and finale goodbye
The gun then goes against my head
Goodbye my love, Goodbye.

-Morgann Talbot

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    March 26

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    Fantastically emotion filled piece!!!!   I hope this is not how you truly feel!!! There is always another answer to solving problems of the heart!!! I should know I'm an expert!!! I enjoyed reading this piece of work!!! thank you for sharing!!!!!

  • jolly rancher
    February 24
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    GUILTY!!

    i personally believe that 1 morgan is guilty of suicide 1. lol


  • blackrainbow
    February 19
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    ill kick your face off!!!!!!!!

  • LookAway
    February 10
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    this is beautiful. i can relate to it alot.


  • MysticalRayne
    February 6

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    aawwwwww very sad an emotional - a gun is never the answer no one is worth harming yourself over - your words are wonderful in this piece and again your rhyme flawless - lun you hunny


  • loststorme
    January 28
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    I feel the same

    my ex just told me I meant nothing and ive been reading poetry like this all day..great write

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