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Dont stop

You have no idea how your eyes haunt me,
how I see flashes in my minds eye and dreams.
Your face is always burning it image into my soul.
Your kisses still linger on my skin,
it has been days since you last touched me.
I close my orbs, catch my breath,
roll my head back and let the waves take
me over once again as they did in your hands.
You do not know how much I already love you,
I am far to scared to say, it's right and I fear
when it could go wrong and leave me alone.
I am sorry I do not tell you, words this way
are hard for me to say.
I hope I express it with my body,
the language I understand in my need.
Each sweet caress, every longing kiss.
Don't stop I ask of thee, it is not just
your touch I ask this, but your heart that
wants to love me.

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  • spideracer gold member
    February 6

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    Well written and expressed, a poem of ones love for their other half. Great job you've done here, though you have one typo, not misspelt, but wrong word. 5th line, ''it has been days sence...'', I think you meant '''since''. Anyway still a great job done here.