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A little piece of Heaven

Seeing you there, can't help but stare.
Holding you near, chases away my fear.
A little piece of Heaven is what I feel,
When before you I do kneel.
In my arms is where you belong,
Loving you just can't be wrong.

A little piece of Heaven is what you are,
Someday you'll know you always were a star.
For in your eyes the world seems new,
To a child sweet and innocent as you.
A little piece of Heaven is what I see,
Every time you smile at me.

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  • TheDayTimeStopped
    January 29, 2009
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    This is beautiful! extremly well done, its simply wow. Just reading it made me smile. Great write.


  • Myjoy
    January 28, 2009

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    Very lovely, this makes me smile for same thoughts, and emotions do run through me when I am around her and she is looking at me. Thank you.