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Three words

I miss you
I love you
I hate you
I want you
I need you
I have you
I lost you
I forget you.

Three words make a difference.
Three words say all that one thousand do.
Three words make someone want to cry,
and three words make someone want to die.

My three words are simple
not hating not loving not anything
My three words are unbreakable
not confusing not lying not guilty







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  • StarIlluminated
    February 1

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    This is a really really really really good poem Emma. I love how you used the three words at the beginning and at the end. It really was awesome

    *KT*


  • Supa Fox
    January 30
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    I really like how every part of this poem works toward the last line. I had to scroll down to see the last three words and I was stuck in complete suspense until I saw them, which I would count as a very good thing. And just as I met the resolve, those words also lead me to millions of other questions. Great write!