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My Swing

That was my swing
My life that I left behind there

All those years of isolation
and rules
of my childhood
were my best

All left behind on my swing
All my happiness
my friends
my carelessness.

Ah,
The life on my swing.

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That's the picture I chose.

Maybe not my best poem but I gave it a shot.

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  • AJishere
    January 28

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    It was amazing. Yes it was. Stop denying it. That is all.

    From AJ.

    My fav. part: The beginning.

    My least fav. part: When it ended. I cried then.