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Fanciful Dreamer.

Her eyes glimmer,
Like the sun,
Open doorways,
To a rich deep soul,
To a mind as sweet as honey,
Dreams forever circling her mind.

She dreams of love,
And decadence,
Of far flung journeys,
Took by chance.

Fanciful dreamer,
What a beauteous mind,
So many wondrous dreams,
Yet to find.

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  • Gillian-Noelle
    January 28

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    As soon as I read this I was struck by the innocence and purity of your words and the images they conjure. I loved this poem. I love "to a mind as sweet as honey". I envision a sweet mind dripping slowly with abstract thoughts and dreams.It's a simple gorgeous poem.Beauteous!!