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Bat.

I see you,
Cutting through the inky blackness,
The strong strokes,
Of your wings,
Beating through the air,
As you dive and swoop,
In your majestic power,
So small you may be,
Yet there’s true strength to see.

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  • skipper
    April 21
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    very good

    I like this it's short but you paint a direct picture