That's when I'll be eighty-nine,
and able to say that
it suits me just fine.
A contest entry
- speak to me in 15 words by Lavender Butterfly.
510 points, ended January 28, 2009, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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89? you don't look it
how lovely...your all your grandchildren planning your birthday.
see ya around



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Catie
Thankyou for commenting and for your very generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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89 ~ way to go!... x
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Lavender Butterfly
Three months and eight days to go in fact!
The children, grandchildren, and even the great-grandchildren are already making plans, so I'm told. How's that for forward thinking?
Five of us arrived in Perth WA in 1957 and with the passage of time we now number 19. If my then wife was still alive it would be 20!
Thankyou for your comment, it is much appreciated.
Best wishes from W A
Shenton
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lol!! This is so cute!! I also took the birthday perspective but it was in a dark way!!
I like nine and fine together...they have good sound to it!! All the best!
~pri
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phoenixonfire
Thankyou for your complimentary comments.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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