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Sensations

Pulsating sensations
intentionally intense
Immense emotion
in such suspense
Incense of my pleasure begin to condense
Enticing your urge,
the aroma of my scent

Impulses take over
we lose all control
Beyond that of my body,
penetrating my soul
Personified connections
now seemingly whole
Elated in ecstasy
while damning my role




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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    February 1

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    Very nice words for that pic...the poem is sensual and flows very well. Thank you so much for entering!


  • PoeticSoul4U
    January 28
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    I apologize I am unsure of how to put the picture on here, but the prompt I used was the first picture, Thank You!!