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clean mud

eye water stained your face
like the glass windows hanging on my church

envy reveals the bitterness you have
and only tears release your comfort
caused by a frown from a joker's past

slay the dragon
kill the demon

my tears come from a laughing clown
so listen to the mimes in your own life

soak your frustrations with the ink of a pen
and let me breathe freedom from the air
even if I choke on the clouds

I want to be stripped from all your green malice
and clothed with the innocence of a child

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  • UnknownFemale
    March 16
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    This is a good poem, but maybe correct the spelling of innocence.