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Forever

Enfold me thus my dear one
Love with me this sweet day
We can live forever now
You and I

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  • SandhyaSuri
    February 3

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    The message is sweet. I think it needed more life and feeling. Made me think of a wedding somehow...Thanks for your entry!


  • SandhyaSuri
    January 28
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    Simple and meaningful.
    Thanks for your entry.