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The Warrior Within




as my chest caves in
and my vision becomes obscured
she dances like a gypsy
just around the edges
to see me through

{soft and sensual is she}


her smile isn't warm
but confident in strength
skin untouched hardened by sun
and eyes sparkle in the pitch black
voice gentle in contrast with her presence

{she is the angel who hides in me}


Everything about her and I scream;
                                                        

                                                              worthy

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A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Angelflower
    February 10

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    this was powerful and yet tenderly written as well. I truly loved your view of the prompt.. It has such a soft intensity about it.. you did such a wonderful job! thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest!

    Angel