Rhapsodies dissolving
deeply into riparian
blue hues.
Can you hear the
forgotten hymns and
rising symphonies?
Echoing within cathedrals
now guarding her lost Sonata.
Her notes became
lost sounds sinking in
times tidal requiem.
Let her dream once more
of castles constructed with music itself.
Author notes
44 WORDS
Prompt: http://redsigns.deviantart.com/art/Hidden-Music-105505997
A contest entry
- Quickie Time!! by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended January 28, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like it.
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i love this write bro! structure and word useage is excellent! Congrats on the HW. Keep doing your thing homie!
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I only know 'riparian' from a Garfield comic! I can't believe you used that word so eloquently. Yeah, I liked the rest of it, too! G
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this is a gorgeous poem that you've written. the imagery that you've created with your words is brilliant. I love this poem a lot..
good luck
kat
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Her notes became
lost sounds sinking in
times tidal requiem.
Fantastic.
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it .
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Simply beautiful. The last line made this write for me!
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absolutely amazing
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This is a wonderful write. I'll admit though, I didn't know some of the words. Well, one word, but the others aren't used very much. This is a well constructed piece. Best of luck in the contest!
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