Room filled with idle gossip
could disperse as flies
buzzing all about
as prophesier leasing lies
tales that vision dreams
with idle thought
encombered
mad or foolish
starry eyes
on opinions unsound
fools, lovers and children
Author notes
Prompt: clutter 36 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Time! Word Prompt - Clutter - 10-50 Words by Kari.
525 points, ended January 27, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i think your cup was painted the wrong color. Kudos on a great write.
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Thank you
Thank you for the applaudes and the wonderful comment given. Haley27
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I like the direction you took with this prompt. It was unique. You did a good job and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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hmm..thats a very different view on the prompt! It did cross my head while writing but I coudnt frame it this way!! you have done justice to the prompt and i like ur language use! I love that line 'prophesier leasing lies' ! Good luck!!
~pri
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Haley27
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