He was her painter of sunsets and skies
Of Dreams without depravity;triumph in flowers
Rainbows would soar across moonbeam fields
As he painted her carefully, every last line...
Every smile, every laugh, and her magical eyes
Twinkling so brightly, yet he captured her all
Always making sure his masterpiece wouldn't fall
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Comments
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Wow, this is very lovely!
Nicely written piece, I love the concept here.
Bravo!!!
♥ Kate -
This is a beautifully done piece. I love the real, raw emotion in this. The context is great, as the observer. I can easily step into the role and see the imagery come to life in my mind. Excellent job here.
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Amazing as always, describes someone, a great person who draws and always do great stuff...
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