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[ How to describe love? As the glue that holds together your broken head? ]

How to describe love?  As the glue that holds together your broken head?
As the smile that lifts me from my blues?
As the way you tell me stop being an ass?  Or
As force that leads us on.
As the piece that lodges us, keeps us from rolling away.
As a little, teeny kitten meowing me a lullaby?
As a mac-truck, unseen in the distance, though we will soon be aware of its prescence.
How do I describe love?  I can't remember.  But I know it's charismatic.

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  • jkh
    February 5

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    I like this. It's all deep and then it's like wait, where was I? I can relate to it too so that's points in its favour. Good job over all. I know this is how married love is described. "... the way you tell me to stop being as ass [.]" Good work.