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Winter Bare

Winter has withered me
Feelings buried in yesterdays snow
Sullen skies
Weathered with goodbyes

A sun that hides
behind monotone that abides
of what could have been
forgotten all

Winter bare
Not even a stare
All is cold
and without care

I will write
of spring
when this tide of loneliness
subsides 

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  • suseann
    February 11
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    Time has moved forward and the wintering is near it's end soon I hope. This has a genuine lonely feel so indiscribable. Yet you have described it all too well. I hope and pray whatever darkness has hovered over you in writing this has passed or is close to it my friend. It's a painful read. Abet a moving one.Please let us see you smiling soon. LOL


  • truembrace
    February 1

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    indeed beautiful and sad - and so wonderfully written despite that sadness. I like the form of this and the ties to the season throughout the lines.

    there is so much to like about this...

    hope all is going ok in your world.

    Kim


  • LionessK
    January 27

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    So beautiful and sad... it makes your heart ache just to read...
    to you my friend.