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Were all in this together

People always try to do things on there own
but they have yet to realize
that were all in this together

We all play an important role
wether main or ensemble
wether actor or actress

We are all conected
in many ways
some we don't even remember
some started at the beggining
and we will know at the end

No matter if your black or white
Indian or Chinese or just American
We all have to realize that were all in this together
So we need to work as a team

A contest entry

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  • Sun-shiney
    February 11
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    i like it


  • HereComesTheSun
    January 29
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    Positive: uplifting
    Negative: just not what im looking for

    thanks for entering

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 28

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    Excellent moe. So true and so courageous. Spoken with wisdom and strength. You put your very heart into this poem; thanks for sharing.
    Brian


  • Shantti silver member
    January 27

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    This is very beautiful... Excellently written!!!!
    And all soo true.
    Good luck in the contest.

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