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My Perfect World

Let me imagine a world
where everything is perfect
Calming ocean blues
no savage reds screaming out at me

Calming words have no effect
my mental state is in tatters
The world is floating above me
letting me soak in the rays trying to make it all better

Let me imagine that you
never said those words
that you still care
and never gazed away from my clinging eyes

I can keep telling myself
that its nothing at all
its my little perfect world
and i beg for you to be in it

In my world
I can make what i want to happen
I can be a princess in a tower, I can be the ugly stepmother
Or have you in love with me

Author notes

*sigh* i wanted to get the first part down and then it...exploded into this.

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    January 27

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    Why sigh??
    I'm glad you got the first part down and all the rest too.
    This is a really good poem, but I wish I could help with what it's talking about :-<
    Anything I can do??
    :->