Blazed attraction, trapped.
Lullabies enchanting butterflies.
It never really mattered,
because we never ran after each other.
Ponderous, I see you stare,
dazzling memoirs of star-wrecked eyes
luminously, enciphered.
[moments later, the crystal, shattered clear.]
Momentarily, contagious contractions revealed,
but as always, feet were glued, hands retreated
and lips were sealed shut
with semiprecious jeweled smiles.
[Hanging broken on the corners of despair.]
Sighs, I hear tender whispers clinging on hope's salvation,
no more space for ridiculous redemption;
I dare not to breathe, I dare not to speak.
You take everything away from me...
[with just one warm glaring stare]
Convulsive epitome of uncomfortable diplomacy,
samples of dreaded anger seeping through congested pores.
I dare not take a step, I dare not sneak,
observing grinding muscles intertwine, vicariously seeing.
[continuously dreaming of fervent swathes.]
I sometimes forget to walk and speak,
to smell, to sneeze;
numbly I enfold heavy armors of defensive couture,
while relentless interventions less not to remind me, just how to breathe....
[when you're just one inch away... from me]
Author notes
I guess you should know, that now I'm writing about a new person a whole new beginning who will hopefully will not end like it always does....
XXVampireeyesXX
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I'm already dead, so why can't I die?
Comments
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aww that was so good dark and romantic. yes to new beginnings
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lol thanks hunni but this is a very old write lol even though its still my top fave
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wonderful write hun.... hugs love ya....... keep penning sorry ive been gone but im trying to get back love ya hugs.......
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thanks sissy!... I know hunni... i love ya too and stay strong.. I'm always here if you need me
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wonderfully written hun -
as for your author notes - cancel cancel cancel
as a dear friend of mine always tells me "what is for you won't go by you" and he's probably right, usually is
congrats on being spotlighted in the group, you're a wonderfully budding talent...
love, light & laughter
Tasha
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lol thank you nice quote btw.. I might apply it every now and then.. its true... thank you I am glad you liked!
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The words are so beautiful and well put together; the language seems so ageless and soft. Such a beautiful story in a poem form and great emotions within it. Can't help but love poems like this. ^_^
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aww thank you it means a lot to me I am glad you enjoyed it
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Such beautiful words in this story!
Very well written and thanks a lot for
sharing it with all of us here!
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thank you for reading I am gald you liked
its one of my personal faves... thanks!
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You are very welcome, it's my pleasure!
Take care!
Jeremy0826
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" star-wrecked eyes " " semiprecious jeweled smiles " ... one word for these images ... wow .
this write really has the feel of the beginning of a relationship ... desire, hesitation, fear, longing .
thanks so much for this write.
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wow.. thank you I am glad you enjoyed it... lol really? wow I didn't notice I was just writing how I felt at the moment
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Absolutely flawless. Beautiful words - beautiful story. I'm so impressed. Its not everyday I get to read perfection and today was for sure one of those days
Lullabies enchanting butterflies.
love that line
KEEP UP THE AWESOMENESS
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wow... thank you for the compliment it is well appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed
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holy ****!!!!!!!!
Wow!! Thisis such an amazing poem! I love the imagery and the vocabulary that you use. Such a beautiful poem and once again you astound me with your passionate writing!
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lol thanks... I was jsut expressing how I felt thanks for reaidng hun!
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WOW! Sweetie, you have penned such a sweet poem, that defines the way love should be taken, in small steps, enjoy the little things, that's what makes it blossom, that's what makes it last...I love you, and I am proud you have moved on and found a new spark...our emotions flow in our poetry...
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awww thanks daddy i am glad you are proud of me I am also porud of you for being more of a father to me than my real one love you!
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This is very well done. I can see all the hesitation that is present in a new romance. My favorite stanza was:
Momentarily, contagious contractions revealed,
but as always, feet were glued, hands retreated
and lips were sealed shut
with semiprecious jeweled smiles.
I hope that everything works out for the best.
Great job.
Mike
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I am glad you enjoyed lol it came out in the bliss of the moment
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