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Granted

Turkey wing bones
  ponder
upon curtain rods.

Thought-crossed fingers
  shoot stars.

  Heart beats a path to
...please.

Wells count pennies
  when the long bone 
is in your fingers.





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Prompt: Wishful Thinking 29 Words
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  • Kari gold member
    February 10

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    This is nice. I enjoyed it and you did wonderful with 29 words. Thanks for your entry and the best of luck.


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 28

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    awesome write. i don't remember when i helped my friend to break it and thinking of what i want. thanks for sharing your poem. good luck.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    January 27
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    OOPS. Forgot these.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    January 27

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    This is really lovely, and such good examples of wishful thinking. Sometimes I read a poem I wish i had written -- this is one of those times. I really enjoyed this.


    • echo-ink
      January 27
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      Thank you so much,
      I don't think another comment
      could ever mean so much to me,

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