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Lost Seasons

Underneath a canopy of aspiring leaves,
Spewed from the bulemic branches
Of a weeping tree, dressed in autumn,
She cries for the souls of the fallen.

Summer lays long and humid,
Dancing in the distorted waves,
Brought about by the choking heat,
Desired by her chilled skin.

Not many moon-turns ago,
The brittle grass sparsely
Spread across the plains
Expressed decaying beauty.

She lays in feigned sleep
Beside the carved stone
That designates an earthly tomb,
Crying tears, spelling love upon her cheek.

By time are the words broken,
Resting on shattered petals,
Shed by a porcelain rose,
Picked from a past bouquet.

Once, what was a haunting sky,
Painted a pallet of poetic shades,
Dark, with the sun peaking through,
Now is a mask of muted horror.

Clinched teeth withhold silent screams,
Fists clutch depression, fight happiness.
Smiles sought after with quiet fury
Are saturated in apathetic sadness.

So she frowns upon the horrid scene,
That which once housed astounding beauty.
Her voice whimpers relentless requiems,
Harmonious despite the discord in her heart.

Bound to sorrow,
Restrained by loss,
The seasons don't look the same,
When ideals of love are lost.

Author notes

Wrote this during school!

I'm not sure about the title:

Lost Seasons?
The Seasons Don't Look the Same?
Beauty Once Known, Horrors shown?
Reaper's Requiem?

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Comments

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  • Broken-Rickie
    February 7, 2009
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    Truly impressive...


  • alesana
    February 4, 2009
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    I saw what your words painted


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 2, 2009
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    Simply fantastic imagery here,
    very descriptive

  • crosscountry07
    February 1, 2009
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    Gorgeous piece! The second to last stanza was truly brilliant. Keep up the amazing work!!! -Liz


  • Painted-Rose
    January 31, 2009
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    This is Beautiful, as always.. : )

    I love your poems, Neph.


  • mari.masquerade.
    January 28, 2009

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    wow!

    This was soo beautiful,
    Everything was put together so well,
    I tried to find my favorite part, but there were too many!

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