Fingers caress strings
holding notes in the air
in the nights and mornings
fingers caress strings
And a warm sound clings
to this moment we share
Fingers caress strings
holding notes in the air
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So lovely and soft, pure acoustic beauty !
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I like the poem, but really enjoy the opening, I see someone disciplined in their craft playing there music,enjoyed
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a most excellent write
your words are also held aloft in mid air , mixing with the notes of your musical write, a lovely poem indeed!
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beautiful, so gently spoken, ah, you...
BellaMari, this is so lovely ...it is as a 'caress' itself.
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Thank you Bella
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So true and so imaginatively you shared the beauty of the love and beauty of the love in words..this is really wonderful poetry...
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WOW!
The best musicians do not play their instruments; they caress them as you have caressed these words.
Well done.
Jim
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Thanks Jim
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Your work strums another set of strings deep inside the heart too. I hope this new year brings you much health and happiness.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Thanks Leo, wishing the same to you
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Short, sweet, and beautiful.
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What perfect refrains you have picked. Beautiful, gentle images. A pleasure to read.
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What a lovely triolet and I simply love the way you've placed it here on this page. it sings....beautiful music, Mari!
~ Nicolette
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I always like it when I read about fingers in a poem, just like this one, the subtleness of the caress and the quiet music it brings
Anna Lee
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Lucky notes,
carrying such memory.
Tenderly beautiful.
M-C
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a lovely triolet, the repeated line takes on a new feeling each time, this has a quiet side ... like a soft guitar strum... really well done... PK
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a beautiful triolet, i love it, it's delicate and your voice is soft and quiet...it is the music of the moment
lovely, Mari
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A poem with as gentle a caress as the moment it describes...
Hugs...Eddy
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Vibrant as the heart notes of a cello! Sweet symphonies to you, Dear Heart!
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