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Hug me from behind

Keep me on your mind

Tell me that you love me

Tell me that you need me

Say these words and be true

Make me fall in love with you

Persuade me

Make me believe that you love me

With all your heart

Tell me that you miss me

When we are apart

Do whatever you can to be in my life

Run to catch up with me in the hallway

Stay with me after class

Walk me to my locker

Make our time together last

Give me truth, love, and honesty...

I'll love you

When you love me<3

Author notes

okay so.. this poem looked really dumb with puncuation lol...

i don't wanna hear anything about how it would be better if it were set up different,

it's my poem, i'll do with it as i wish goddamnit!

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  • tarcus
    April 8

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    The first flush of a love torn heart is always the hardest to take when it fails.
    Be still beating heart lest you be invaded.


  • alwaysapartofme
    February 7
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    i like this poem wonderful job!


  • Angierie
    January 28

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    Ahhh.. highschool looooooove
    I miss it..lol

    Very cute darlin!