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WE must be two

I do not hate you,
how could I?
I do not condone you,
for I have wronged also.

I do not wish you harm,
that would be wrong, right?
I do not wish we never were,
for you once brought me great joy.

I do not wish on more conflict,
that frustrates me, and you?
I do not hat the hard lesson you taught,
for it has proved vital for survival.

But now....

I do know we can't be one,
It was hard to accept you see?
I do wish you all the happiness
that you never quite found with me

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i know we cant be one, we must now be two

can you understand what I am trying to ask?

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  • enlightenedatheist
    June 17, 2009

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    I do not wish on more conflict,
    that frustrates me, and you?
    I do not hat the hard lesson you taught,
    for it has proved vital for survival.

    a wonderous piece dear


  • abuyi
    March 20, 2009
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    I do wish you all the happiness
    that you never quite found with me.. ufft.. it hit me

    yup i can understand what ur saying.. i feels guys n general are really bad in breakups.. than girls.
    girls just can express more

    hope your fine.. have nice day dear

    abuyi


    • Li snuffles
      June 9, 2009

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      Awk... thank you so much friend...!

      Your comment meant a lot, i hope the poem was alright too... lol

      ...xx