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Together and Forever

Waiting by the locker
Wondering what was he thinking about
He was a few lockers down
And then was nobody around

What should she do
A poor girl like her
He was the dumper
While she was hurt

She cried for weeks
Hiding inside
That she new the true
That it ended like this

He was scared
Cause he secretly loved her
He look towards her
As she looked away

She knew he still loved her
But didn't know what to say

He knew she loved him
But didn't know what to say

He couldn't take the tears
The tears that would fall
When he would tell her
That he couldn't love her

She couldn't take the pain
The pain that would hurt
When she told him she knew

Her friends think he's a jerk
His friends think he's cool

Her friends are there
His friends will never see the truth

They were still young
They were both strong
They knew that together
They can reach out to the sky.

She was done
Hiding herself
Trying to ease the pain

He was done
Hiding himself
Trying to ease the pain

They ran to each other
Kissed each other
And said together
"We'll spend as much time
Together and forever"

They both kiss
And she knew
She could run away
Any day
With him on the side.

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  • Lucas McDrake
    February 2
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    This is awesome!...
    ...but slightly dizzy-making. I sort of got confused.
    BUT IT'S STILL AWESOME!