My last wish,
was to keep our last kiss,
and for it to always feel,
like it was our first,
for it to still feel like you love me,
and hope to never loose you,
little did I know,
that, that day would bring our last,
and final day for love,
because that was the last day,
that I would ever see you again,
that it was the last chance I had,
to say everything that I felt,
and all the things left unsaid,
and for them to be spoken,
this was the day,
when the earth stood still,
and they rushed you into darkness,
all because that guy who shot you;
So I'm here to say,
I still love you,
and I miss you,
even more than the air I breathe;
And I only wish for one thing;
to have you here with me again,
and for you to never leave me,
for you to stay by my side,
all so we would never have,
another last kiss!..!..!
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And I only wish for one thing;
to have you here with me again,
and for you to never leave me,
for you to stay by my side,
all so we would never have,
another last kiss!..!..!
I love this stanza. Great write! -
Wow really passionate poem. You might want to edit it a little, there may be some leters missing from some words
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Very well written andvery deep yet so sad thank you for your entry
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Wow. This is real deep. I like it and understand it completely. You speak the truth wholeheartedly.
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