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Above Love

What is above love?
What could stop this feeling I have for you?
I need you so much.
I long to see you, and see your smile.

I want to be your wife.
I want the picture perfect life.

I need to figure out this for a moment.
I need to love you more than the meaning of the word love.
Could that ever be possible?
Who knows?
I'll go above love to find a way to love you more.

I want to be your wife.
I want the picture perfect life.











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11."hanging by a moment" by lifehouse

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  • afireinthisheart
    January 30

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    Beautiful

    There's a lot of factors, when anyone falls in love
    I made the mistake of complacency for starters.
    I also forgot about communication, which is critical today. With this poem, what has to be done, to get the point across, it's to talk, instead of silently wishing and hoping...this is beautiful!...smile...David


  • Scyphon
    January 27
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    beautifull written
    I really like this write
    it was very well done