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Weak

I’m so strong, you’re so weak
If you didn’t fuck up you could’ve had me
You’re just a waste of breath, a waste of time
You left me feeling empty but honestly, I’m fine
There are days I think about you & what we could have had
But really there’s no point, I found a better man
I used to think you were all I need & much more
And now I sit and think you’re just an fucking whore
Your girlfriend is a fugly bitch & I wanna kick her ass
But then I realised that you two are a perfect little match
Turn your ass around, don’t talk to me
The incidents have made me stronger you but you’re still really weak.

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  • joshualee
    February 10

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    I'd throw in a "fuckin" or two. And a few minor revisions. But very good. And If that guy can make it into a good song. Then go for it. It seems like this guy obviously fucked up big. He let a talented, beautiful girl get away.

  • this is pretty damn good, can i make this into a song?

    • HaileeDear
      January 29
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      as long as i get the credit and i get to hear its "bad ass-ness"