I got some money from my bank,
and my allowance too
and went down to the corner store,
to buy these here for you
I know you like chocolate malt balls
cuz you threw some at me
when I was at the show last week
an' you didn't think I'd see
I stole some of moms roses too
and knocked the bugs all off
made this vase with a jar I found
down by the water trough
I sort of took a bath and all
and even combed my hair
and put on some of dads cologne
and changed my underwear
I hope you don't think I'm a creep
for what I'm gonna say
I dream of you when I'm asleep
and think of you all day
So, anyway, I wondered if
you might like me some too
cuz if you don't then I will go
and won't be buggin' you
Hey! gosh what are you doin' now
you mean you think I'm cool
well, maybe we can tell the kids
tomorrow after school
When they see me carry your books
and me holdin' your hand
all the guys will be so jealous
and I'll be feelin' grand.
Author notes
Didn't we all want to have that special little girl in the playground love us most?
A contest entry
- Unintentionally Dispicable... by Lady Patricia.
826 points, ended February 10, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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brilliant write, enjoyed reading this!
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ADORABLE POEM
Now this brings back the memories of grade school and my first litle crushes on boys.
Girls would do the silliest things too to get there attention. As we got older we still did . A wonderful poem and a delight to read this morning. You take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Adorable!
I love poems like these!
They're endearing and sweet and funny and oh so cute.
Oh So Cute!
I only have one critique for this poem. Your first line for some reason throws me off, everytime I read it. I dont know if it has too many words or if its because it seems backwards or anything-- I DONT know why.
I could just be crazy, but yeah. That was all.
Everything else here was beautiful.
THANKS for the read.
Lady
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Awww this is really precious and brings back school memories. But I certainl;y wasn't one of those girls. *Sigh* We all have our own cross to bear!
A gorgeous tale and lovely rhyme anf flow.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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