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Key Of Doors

Silky smooth and cold, is the key of doors,
Like our hearts, so beautifully made,
And wrote as we want, as we choose.
A thousand doors unlocked mysteries,
To our hearts and souls,
And people take advantage,
Of what they need.

A contest entry

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  • Denerica
    February 9

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    Wow

    Only 11 yrs old and you wrote such a clear vision to what people do to others. Liked all of it but the line a thousand doors unlocked mysteries is a message to be shared. Blessings.


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    February 3

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    This is a really strong piece,there is some good imagry, and I think it has a nice gentle rhythm to it,
    I t has a good feel to it, as if you are actually talking to us, I think its really very good, good luck in the contest


  • teen poeticsoul
    January 27

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    Very nice,

    I like the fact that it had a very easy flow. I can really appreciate how you interpreted the picture and I wish you the best in the contest.


  • StarEyes
    January 27

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    Wow! Ilove this! You said a lot with so few words! This is great!

    Best of luck in this contest!